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Last Strands of The Galaxy

Started by Slakova · 10/06/2006 · 08:12 AM · 8 replies · 0 reads

S SlakovaOP

OP 10/06/2006 · 08:12 AM #1

Wrote this at school, enjoy.

The Last Strands of the Galaxy

Two hundred golden, gleaming hulls, gathered on the fringes of the Galaxy .Terran arrogance had mandated the use of such a small force. They did not expect resistance.
For the Terrans, this was to be a glorious day . It would renew faith in the Reclaiming, a faith much needed. For weeks they had been advertising on televised and telecast intentions to crush the peaceful race of the Free Alliance flooding telecast, telegraph and televised networks with propaganda proclaiming their people the chosen of God, rightful owners of the whole galaxy. They will crush them humiliate them.
The system they were fighting in was not a primary system within the Free Alliance . It lay upon the edge and contained only various small military facilities and . It was, nothing, here that the mighty military of the Terrans will crush them. The Terran Empire had chosen to show the the Free Alliance undeniable might of their fleet, a force not even approaching the full size of the great Terran Navy.
The Free Alliance valued one thing above all else, information. Their need for information had led to the formation of the Free Alliance intelligence network, an entity with eyes and ears in every space port, cite, planet every were. It delivered to the Free Alliance every plan the Terrans had laid out for their assault even before the Terran commanders received the information to attack. This allowed the Free Alliance to plan for weeks the battle that would take place in one of their own systems.
It was a wide and diverse mixture of battleships and cruisers, each ship equipped with state of the art Terran laser, railgun, missel technology. Their ships were bulky and slow, but made up for their lack of agility with the devastating power of their batteries and heavy armor. The fleet organized itself in typical Terran military fashion a straight line designed to cut threw any defense to maximize the ghastly effect of fire against the enemy's front. Their hulls adorned with religious texts, televising messages televised of Terran might, interspersed with brain washing honor of the Reclaiming. This was their moment; this was what they lived for. They did not know what they were getting into!
The first volley of fire erupted from the Titan the command vessel, its turrets taking aim and firing as one, blue laser slicing into the side of a Free Alliance ship it obsorbed the energy voly until the vessel's hull ruptured, pieces of metal wires, human bodies it scattering like dust among the rank and file of the Free Alliance force. It Had Begun.

The Free Alliances forces split into smaller wings, each numbering 5 battleships, all equipped with devastating Alliance laser technology. Accelerating with frightening speed, they dove into the Terran ranks. Terran cruisers equipped with close-range weaponry moved to intercept as wave after wave of the smaller vessels engaged single targets, like a furious pack of wolves

H Horizon

11/06/2006 · 06:33 PM #9

pretty cool. A good read. I would read more if you wrote it

H Havock

10/06/2006 · 11:24 AM #8

sounds pretty good to me

S SlakovaOP

10/06/2006 · 09:58 AM #7

Heres the rest
The first volley of fire erupted from the Titan the command vessel, its turrets taking aim and firing as one, blue laser slicing into the side of a Free Alliance ship it obsorbed the energy voly until the vessel's hull ruptured, pieces of metal wires, human bodies it scattering like dust among the rank and file of the Free Alliance force. It Had Begun.

The Free Alliances forces split into smaller wings, each numbering 5 battleships, all equipped with devastating Alliance laser technology. Accelerating with frightening speed, they dove into the Terran ranks. Terran cruisers equipped with close-range weaponry moved to intercept as wave after wave of the smaller vessels engaged single targets, like a furious pack of wolves, dodging and weaving, maximizing maneuverability.
And then it happened. Massive, green blasts erupted from seemingly nowhere, and the command ship Apocalypse went up in flames. Another blast erupted what seemed like seconds later, and tore through a squad of battleship, their hulls briefly flickering with bright green energy!
The Terrans did not expect this. Their rigid command structure inhibiting televised communications, they did not realize what was happening. Lack of communication in the fleet meant that they could not cope with the sudden appearance of this unseen terror. It was a Alliance mother ship! Huge and immense it fired bolts of green red laser volts destroying everything in its wake.

Swooping in, the Alliance frigate forces caused even more confusion, sending the Terrans forces into disarray. At this point, communications broke down. Terrans battle doctrine demanded sacrifice, and so the Navy could not disengage. Captains and their crews valiantly threw down their lives for the Empire, confident that they, God's chosen, would be victorious. The few that retreated would later be executed for cowardice, their families enslaved and their Houses disbanded.
For hours streams of glaring light lit up the system that n

S SlakovaOP

10/06/2006 · 09:54 AM #6

lol i am only in 8th grade guys this was so hard for me to make its a 3 page story. if you want me to right more its going to take me a year.

K KILLA

10/06/2006 · 09:03 AM #5

well it doesnt look like it does it

S StormofBla

10/06/2006 · 08:57 AM #4

..... Does it involve Spacefed?

K KILLA

10/06/2006 · 08:20 AM #3

Pretty amazing man i think you should write the rest of the book and my uncle can publish it no lie hes a publisher lol

H Havock

10/06/2006 · 08:15 AM #2

sounds interesting, I wouldn`t mind reading that

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